Final Journal 1

 

              I write about my evaluation for a year. First, I have a good point as I take this class. I was absent this writing class, but only one time which is to take a driving test. Also, I did my homework every time and submitted it by the deadline. This class is a little difficult for me because I was given a paragraph. It is sometimes difficult theme subject matter. I think that the topic “GM food” was so difficult. I remember that I looked up a ward in a Wikipedia, and I took a lot of time to finish the paragraph. I think I was taught a lot of things about grammar by Mr. Waterman. For example, topic sentence, “fanboy”, “FRAG”, sequencer, and time. I couldn’t use “s” of the third person singular present form very well. Therefore, I was often advised by Mr. Waterman. Journal is a little troublesome for me. However, I think it is good to get my skill. Also, it is gave me a chance to feel English. I could send you all of the Journals. I’m proud of that I could do.

In this spring semester, I gave good evaluation “A” from Mr. Waterman. Therefore, I decided to get “A” or “S” in this semester. I tried to send all of the assignments include Journals. This time, I’m writing and sending two Final Journals. I want to know Mr. Waterman’s evaluation to my journals. Could I write them well? If it is possible for him to check my journals, I want to know them and to give his advice.

              I have heard that the writing class of next year is so hard for us. Therefore, I try to study very hard more than now.

 

              Thank you for giving a lot advice to me in this writing class.