Final Journal 2

 

-Let’s write the original story-

              One day, there were a boy and his friends. When they played in a forest, the boy found something like a piece of cloth with being rolled by the tree. As he opened it, he was surprised because it was a map to go to giants’ country. He didn’t understand because he hadn’t thought that there is such country. He had seemed the country is only the world of the fairy tale. He called out his friends immediately, and he decided to go to there with his friends. The map showed that taking on the boat. Then, he borrowed his grandfather his boat, and floated it on the near river. He and his friends departed from the forest. Following the map, they found a strange tunnel which has never seen. They passed it and arrived at the giants’ country in the end. At first, the boy was surprised at the giants’ size. Also, He thought they may eat us. In fact they are gentle very much. They welcomed us. The boy and his friends saw the Crown and the queen and talk with the Crown. The Crown said “we have a daughter, but she is long=lost. We don’t know where she is.” “Please find her, and we give you some wonderful treasure.” “Also, if you found her, something is revealed. When he heard it, the boy and his friends were exited. Immediately, they decided to find the princess. They took the boat again, and went forward. After a while, they found the island. The boy cried out “Wow”. At that time, the boy woke up from his dream.

 

 

              The words I must use are “giant, boat, something is revealed, crown and long=lost”.

 

              Thank you for reading until last line.

Final Journal 1

 

              I write about my evaluation for a year. First, I have a good point as I take this class. I was absent this writing class, but only one time which is to take a driving test. Also, I did my homework every time and submitted it by the deadline. This class is a little difficult for me because I was given a paragraph. It is sometimes difficult theme subject matter. I think that the topic “GM food” was so difficult. I remember that I looked up a ward in a Wikipedia, and I took a lot of time to finish the paragraph. I think I was taught a lot of things about grammar by Mr. Waterman. For example, topic sentence, “fanboy”, “FRAG”, sequencer, and time. I couldn’t use “s” of the third person singular present form very well. Therefore, I was often advised by Mr. Waterman. Journal is a little troublesome for me. However, I think it is good to get my skill. Also, it is gave me a chance to feel English. I could send you all of the Journals. I’m proud of that I could do.

In this spring semester, I gave good evaluation “A” from Mr. Waterman. Therefore, I decided to get “A” or “S” in this semester. I tried to send all of the assignments include Journals. This time, I’m writing and sending two Final Journals. I want to know Mr. Waterman’s evaluation to my journals. Could I write them well? If it is possible for him to check my journals, I want to know them and to give his advice.

              I have heard that the writing class of next year is so hard for us. Therefore, I try to study very hard more than now.

 

              Thank you for giving a lot advice to me in this writing class.